Section 5 needs to be tweaked based on professor feedback.

Competency Thesis Part 1 – make indicated edits baed on professor comments. Max length for part 1 is to be 15 pages, so the sections need to be condensed from the 28 submitted to 15. Section 5 needs to be tweaked based on professor feedback.
Drafts sections 6-10 need edited based on professor feedback.
Sections 1-10 then need combined into one paper, not to exceed 30 pages. Reference page and title page no included in 30 page max.
Add abstract. Ensure headings and subheadings follow APA guidelines.
Copy of the sections is included for reference and grading rubic.
Paper and professor feedback are attached.
Everything has been attached for the edit. Instructions, thesis, professor feedback, grading rubics, etc..
**PLEASE READ ALL UPLOADED DOCUMENTS BEFORE BEGINNING TO ENSURE UNDERSTANDING OF WHAT IS NEEDED.**